Dylan’s ‘Great Poem’: Eight Johnston School pupils’ words chosen out
of hundreds worldwide to be part of bilingual epic poem

JOHNSTON Primary School’s last-minute entry for a poetry competition has been heralded as a success, and has even yielded a prize.

The worldwide competition which was entered by the Year Five and Year Six pupils, who are taught by Mr Tim Pounder, saw the children contributing towards ‘Dylan’s Great Poem’.

The poem is a bilingual piece of work which has been completely written by young people aged between seven and 25 to celebrate International Dylan Thomas Day.

To enter the competition, budding young poets had to submit four lines of poetry, with no more than eight words per line based around Dylan Thomas’ famous poem ‘The Hand That Signed the Paper’.

The best 100 lines which were received in the worldwide competition were then combined to create the ‘Great Poem’.

The poem, which was a combined effort uniting a variety of different countries around the world, was recited live at Cardiff Library on International Dylan Thomas Day (Saturday May 14).

From the hundreds of submissions received, an incredible eight pupils from Johnston C.P. had their lines chosen for the final poem.

Mr Pounder said that having so many children from the school contributing to the final poem was a wonderful surprise. He said the competition result was a bonus, because the way in which all the children within the class embraced the task was what really impressed him.

He said: “I only decided to enter the competition at the eleventh hour and thought we had left it too late, so to have so many lines be included in the poem is an unexpected bonus.

“We just did some classwork based on it and asked them to think about how they could contribute to the ‘Great Poem’

“We put a lot of emphasis on writing for a purpose in school and this helped focus their thoughts. It shows what can be achieved by our pupils.

“Once the children started talking about what ‘The Hand That Signed the Paper’ was about, they really got into it and the quality of their work was incredible.

“In my day, we didn’t touch poetry at this level until we were in secondary school, but if you don’t give children opportunity you don’t know what they are capable of and the pupils have created something inspirational.

“I’m extremely proud of them. Firstly, for showing such enthusiasm for poetry and secondly for creating such brilliant work.”

Mr Pounder’s words were echoed by Eva John, Challenge Adviser for English and Literacy.

She said: “The children responded very strongly to Dylan Thomas’s poem, ‘The Hand That Signed the Paper’.

“Their own writing on the subject of hands, using the poem as a stimulus, reflects their clarity of observation, sensitivity and individuality.

“It is a wonderful achievement to have their words selected as part of an international bilingual poem in celebration of a great Welsh poet.”

Dylan’s Great Poem can be viewed on the Literature Wales website.